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Wrong, My hubby said: " You are the lastest one to suicide". So you see, I am very stubborn, never will 抛开自己. (revised)

annayin(??)

What if I am wrong,
that a wind brings your fragrance,
twining trails thirst for our footprints,
a beach cradles waves from its ocean?

What if I am wrong,
that a moon waxing or waning in our pattern,
an oasis is only another cloud castle,
a voyage sets off on wrong wings?

What if
a door I fear to knock will shut
no blossom to burst,
no rustle from leaves?

What if
there will be no fire to
take away my breath
as a starry night ends in a knot?

What if
I will leave with no answer?
What if
you will dig my ashes sometimes later?

(#1675177@0)
Last Updated: 2004-4-6

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枫下拾英 / 乐韵书香 / 花瓣雨系列之 What if? -annayin(??); 2004-4-5 {625} (#1672947@0)

刺！写的勉强！ -spine(刺); 2004-4-5 (#1673382@0)

MM,你的刺真厉害:P -lizpan(空白); 2004-4-5 (#1673407@0)

刺！何时JJ也火眼金睛？叹！幸亏现在还是秘密！ -spine(刺); 2004-4-5 (#1673416@0)

盾来!再说就要穿了:D:D -lizpan(空白); 2004-4-5 (#1673427@0)

I am in a good mood after writing this. I only concern the last line, others I think good. -annayin(??); 2004-4-5 (#1673624@0)

Ha ha. It is time to poke you back. Btw, will you join the poet group? -annayin(??); 2004-4-5 (#1673629@0)

我手笔差，只刺不写，估计不会的了：） -spine(刺); 2004-4-5 (#1673645@0)

理解！有话说不清楚，有心表白不尽之感觉！你有心写就有感动，我无心读就有木讷！如若不信，一周后再来看这首！检视自己，当抛开自己！ -spine(刺); 2004-4-5 (#1673630@0)

Wrong, My hubby said: " You are the lastest one to suicide". So you see, I am very stubborn, never will 抛开自己. (revised) -annayin(??); 2004-4-6 {583} (#1675177@0)
What if I am wrong,
that a wind brings your fragrance,
twining trails thirst for our footprints,
a beach cradles waves from its ocean?

What if I am wrong,
that a moon waxing or waning in our pattern,
an oasis is only another cloud castle,
a voyage sets off on wrong wings?

What if
a door I fear to knock will shut
no blossom to burst,
no rustle from leaves?

What if
there will be no fire to
take away my breath
as a starry night ends in a knot?

What if
I will leave with no answer?
What if
you will dig my ashes sometimes later?

文字头重脚轻，意境头轻脚重。赞叹之余有醉八仙之感！ -spine(刺); 2004-4-7 (#1675205@0)

There is no wrong or right. It is just feelings. If you feel it is right. It will be never wrong. -go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!); 2004-4-5 (#1673657@0)

Nice to hear from you again. How about your business? -annayin(??); 2004-4-6 (#1673866@0)

希望您能参加,为我们华人争光。好运！
-jackysandy(Sandy); 2004-4-7 (#1676140@0)

@Las Vegas

Wrong, My hubby said: " You are the lastest one to suicide". So you see, I am very stubborn, never will 抛开自己. (revised)

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