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枫下拾英 / 心情随笔 / 闲人偶深夜无事写了4首中文诗，大家投票你们想要看那一首。。。。投票多的我会分享出来求点评。。。只1首，无它， just for fun ~ 大家请跟帖写出1，2，3，4中的一个数字。。。 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116719@0) +1

4 -sailor(Ocean & Mountain); 2021-11-17 (#14116725@0) +2

坐等看你和楼下谁得分多。。。LOL -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116777@0)

没看到照片，也捧场：3 -steven8888(夜太黑); 2021-11-17 (#14116728@0) +1

你没看到啊，等明年吧。。。谢捧场 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116776@0)

抗议，必须四首都分享出来 -cicy(HuntforFreedom); 2021-11-17 (#14116793@0)

这这这不好 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116817@0)

再抗议 -cicy(HuntforFreedom); 2021-11-17 (#14116831@0)

淘气~ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116872@0)

继续抗议 -cicy(HuntforFreedom); 2021-11-17 (#14116878@0)

上次那几句关于hope的英文，并不是我写的，是Emily Dickinson的一首诗里的几句 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116920@0)

上次的错过了，这次不能错过 -cicy(HuntforFreedom); 2021-11-17 (#14116925@0)

错过什么？ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116926@0)

错过那个hope啊 -cicy(HuntforFreedom); 2021-11-17 (#14116930@0)

Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all. -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116934@0)

让我崇拜一下 -cicy(HuntforFreedom); 2021-11-17 (#14116937@0)

5 -897102(肉俩不良帅); 2021-11-17 (#14116819@0) +1

5大概要再等一周 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116871@0)

都贴出来吧 -silkshimmer(流苏); 2021-11-17 (#14116886@0)

瑕疵太多，一首就够丢人了 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116889@0) +1

狮子多了不咬
写诗最重要的就是大胆
哪怕诗真的没那好，比勇气肯定盖过了所有人
-manniangpai(满两拍); 2021-11-17 {74} (#14117105@0)

2 -spicy(人在旅途); 2021-11-17 (#14116927@0) +1

你们真是难为我，每个人弄个数 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116936@0)

等等看谁的点赞多 -spicy(人在旅途); 2021-11-17 (#14116946@0) +1

嗯，晚上再来check。。。走了 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14117069@0)

我选1😜 -evelyn123(Eva); 2021-11-17 (#14116947@0) +1

又来个淘气的 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14116975@0)

😜😜 -evelyn123(Eva); 2021-11-17 (#14117134@0) +1

来了，希望大家喜欢 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 {687} (#14117862@0) +3

不错，相伴确无羁绊，爱的最高境界。 -anexplorer(页于); 2021-11-17 (#14117975@0) +1

~~~ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14118001@0)

让我想起了一首歌里唱的 “听，雪落下的声音” -returntoffice(等等); 2021-11-17 (#14118485@0)

那首歌我也听过啊。。。我总是不满意自己的诗，语言贫瘠没法完全的表达 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14118564@0)

意境自然，感情丰满。小Justin陪乐独到。打分：95！ -steven8888(夜太黑); 2021-11-18 (#14119443@0) +2

谢谢，会努力~ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-18 (#14120102@0)

非常不错了！如果开照片，就给100分！ -steven8888(夜太黑); 2021-11-18 (#14120291@0)

谢谢，100分太高,95分正好：）那个照片都不是全身。。。算了，以后有机会的 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-18 (#14120573@0)

很不错，有意境 -spicy(人在旅途); 2021-11-18 (#14120331@0) +1

谢谢才女~ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-18 (#14120574@0)

昨天读了一首好诗，分享一下 -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 {840} (#14118123@0)

Bob Moorehead > Quotes > Quotable Quote “The paradox of our time in history is that we have taller buildings but shorter tempers, -evelyn123(Eva); 2021-11-17 {2679} (#14118154@0) +1

So well written, especially "We've added years to life not life to years."....so true ~ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14118568@0)

That's what i felt! -evelyn123(Eva); 2021-11-17 (#14118644@0) +1

这诗配上今天外面的天气，感觉so sad.. -clear(clear); 2021-11-17 (#14118176@0) +1

有点blue～ -evelyn123(Eva); 2021-11-17 (#14118191@0)
She was brilliant -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14118569@0)

投票4最多。。。Here it is, a sad one
Sep 25,2021
Sitting two feet from you
My heart shaking like boiling water
I want to flee from this moment
Hearing the threatening words
Denying the reality from happening
I wish you were a stranger to me
Tell me what you want from me
Tell me how much more love you need
Tell me if you still want me in your life
Rushing out of the house like a gust
No answer is the answer
-doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 {445} (#14118580@0)

好诗 -manniangpai(满两拍); 2021-11-17 (#14118583@0)

Thx~ -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14118595@0)

If this is the thing happening, hug～ -evelyn123(Eva); 2021-11-17 (#14118641@0)

Happened....hug -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14118692@0) +1

😘😘 -evelyn123(Eva); 2021-11-17 (#14118885@0)

I know this situationAn employee didn't want to take the jabs. The boss was talking to him and firing him. -sailor(Ocean & Mountain); 2021-11-17 {86} (#14118784@0)

:) -doris99(智🐮); 2021-11-17 (#14118913@0)

这个中文我不认识，不算。 -anexplorer(页于); 2021-11-18 (#14120789@0)

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